desert flower

I actually thought that some of your descriptions were really interesting. Like when you were describing the room he was in. And the girl. The small details like the blue ...

'Turmoil' is the exact word for the beginning of the piece. I think it's great how you mixed up her thoughts with what was going on around her. :D Created ...

That beautiful sound woke him; the beautiful sound of ringing payals . It was only his instinct to follow it. Follow her. The girl with the misty eyes and a ...

Thanks a lot! :D

Hello. I'm new to YWS. I really love to write. But I need someone to honestly comment on my writing. I usually ask my friends. But they always say good ...